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They've noticed you at last

All the stars are made of stardust,
They’ve noticed you at last!
Blurred, beauty, far away and unreachable,
They’ve noticed you at last;
Ye not me, it's you;
Nao, probabilities of energia i’m passing through.

Want a perfect smart rest.
They’ve noticed you at last,
All i’m holding is watchtower sand.
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All the stars are made of stardust,
They’ve noticed you at last!
Blurred, beauty, far away and unreachable,
They’ve noticed you at last;
Ye not me, it's you;
Nao, probabilities of energia i’m passing through.

Want a perfect smart rest.
They’ve noticed you at last,
All i’m holding is watchtower dust.

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Kayıt Tarihi : 2.2.2010 15:42:00
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  • Zeynep Nilgün Gökçeöz
    Zeynep Nilgün Gökçeöz

    I liked your poem too congratulations

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  • Erdal Ceyhan
    Erdal Ceyhan

    Did you write another poem for only one word ?! Itis unordinary. Congratulations. Try another one..
    ERCEY. 2.2.2010

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  • Perihan Pehlivan
    Perihan Pehlivan

    very good

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