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şair yüreği her zaman
hüzün dolu neşe dolu ..
dugusallık diz boyu
dalından koparılmış çiçeğe benzer ...
susuz vazolarda kalmaması dileğimle..
kutlarım yürekten.
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dileklerinizin gerçekleşmesi umuduyla güzel bir şiir olmuş kaleminiz daim olsun

Arkadaşım biliyorum ve de tahmin ediyorum,yüreğindeki o acının dinmesi kolay değil.Size tekrar sabırlıklar diliyorum.Bu güzel şiirinizi tekrar beğeni ile okudum,sağlıcakla kalınız.

sevmek böylesine derin tebrikler

çok hoş ve içten mısralar harika yüreğinize sağlık

Muhterem şairem.
Antoloji denizinde sörf yaparken vardığım şiir adanızın bu ağacının altında nefeslendim.Dertlerimle hemdert,kederlerimle müteellim olarak çok beğendiğim için altına bir şeyler yazmak istedim.Tebriklerimle tam puan ile ant.alarak bir şiirimle de şiirinize mülaki oluyorum Selam sevgi ve saygılarımı Adapazarı' dan güneye doğru uçan kuşların kanatlarına yükleyerek yolluyorum.Kabul buyurunuz Lütfen. Kalınız saadetle.

Ben Sana Geliyorum.

Nefesim sen kokarak aldığım her nefesin,
Soluğunda sen olup içime yerleşirsin.
Sana olan özlemim dayanılmaz olsada,
O nefesle ısınıp kaynar durur yüreğim.

Kaynayan yüreğimde sen olursun ezberim.
Sana dokunmak için göğsümdedir ellerim.
Baktıkça hep oluyor gözlerimde gözlerin,
Birazcık özlem gider ama sen bilemezsin.

Yaşamak için sana inan ki ben mecburum.
Bak yine akşam oldu hüzün çöktü içime.
Kollarımı açarak sarılmak istiyorum,
Sen bana gelemedin ben sana geliyorum.. ...halil müftüoğlu

Yürekten tebrik ediyor, paylaşımlarının devamını diliyorum!
saygıyla....

Bu güzel şiirinizi tekrar büyük bir haz alarak okudum,her şey gönlünüzce olsun.yürek sesiniz hiç susmasın.

Sevgi dolu yürekten güzel bir sevda şiiri okudum. Sizi kutluyorum. 10 + ANT. Saygı ve sevgi ile kalın.

Sana
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