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  • İrfan Yılmaz
    İrfan Yılmaz 15.10.2011 - 11:41


    Sevgili Kardeşim, değerli antoloji.com şairi Sayın: MEHMET ÇOBANOĞLU

    Beğenerek ve saygı duyarak okuduğum bu şiirinize Tekirdağ'dan tam puan geliyor.

    Tebrik ediyor; başarınızın daim, kaleminiz her dem kudretli olması ve ilham perinizin başınızdan eksik olmaması dileklerimi sayfanıza bırakıyorum.

    Sevgi ve saygılarımla. Yorum + antoloji + Tam puan.

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  • İrfan Yılmaz
    İrfan Yılmaz 15.10.2011 - 11:41


    Sevgili Kardeşim, değerli antoloji.com şairi Sayın: MEHMET ÇOBANOĞLU

    Beğenerek ve saygı duyarak okuduğum bu şiirinize Tekirdağ'dan tam puan geliyor.

    Tebrik ediyor; başarınızın daim, kaleminiz her dem kudretli olması ve ilham perinizin başınızdan eksik olmaması dileklerimi sayfanıza bırakıyorum.

    Sevgi ve saygılarımla. Yorum + antoloji + Tam puan.

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  • Kralkız Gül Eser
    Kralkız Gül Eser 15.10.2011 - 06:12

    Sevgili şair kutluyorum yüreginizi ve kaleminizi sevgiler kralkız

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