Arala kapıyı bir bak yüzüme,
Kanımla karışıp aktın özüme,
Kulak vermesende benim sözüme,
Ben senin aşkına talibim tatlım.
Ne yollar kat ettim buraya kadar,
Bu öyle bir aşk ki canımı yakar,
könül ayrılmayır öz baharından,
söhbet baharından söz baharından
deyirem vetenin birce qış günü
yaxşıdır qürbetin yüz baharından.
Devamını Oku
söhbet baharından söz baharından
deyirem vetenin birce qış günü
yaxşıdır qürbetin yüz baharından.
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Güzel söz,güzel duygular,sonsuz sevgi delicesine.Ve güzel şiir.Kaleminiz hep varolsun.
İşve yap,naz et cevrinle öldür,
İster baş tacı et,ister süründür,
Bu kalp sade,sade senindir,
Ben senin kalbine talibim tatlım
İçten, duygulu ve anlamlı; tebrikler... 10 puan... Ant.+... Sevgiyle...
SEVDA YÜKLÜ,ANLAM DOLU
ANLATIMI OLAĞANÜSTÜ GÜZELLİKTE,
OKUMAYA DOYULMAYAN DİZELER.
TAM PUAN VE DE SAYGILAR BENDEN.
......................HALİLŞAKİR
çok hoş bir şiir olmuş......aşk ne güzel bir şeyse herşeyine talip oluyoruz..acısınada -tatlısına da ....
Aşka talip olmak her şeyi göze almak tır yüreğine sağlık
İster yar diye bağrında taşı,
İster önüme koy zehirli aşı,
Gözümden aktı kan ile yaşı,
Ben senin çilene talbim tatlım.
Duygusu güzel ve titiz bir çalışma
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