Ben Senin Aşkına Talibim Tatlım Şiiri - ...

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Arala kapıyı bir bak yüzüme,
Kanımla karışıp aktın özüme,
Kulak vermesende benim sözüme,
Ben senin aşkına talibim tatlım.

Ne yollar kat ettim buraya kadar,
Bu öyle bir aşk ki canımı yakar,

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  • Rabiye Tanrıverdioğlu
    Rabiye Tanrıverdioğlu 26.11.2010 - 09:58

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  • Habip Ata Giresunlu
    Habip Ata Giresunlu 23.09.2010 - 23:54

    Güzel söz,güzel duygular,sonsuz sevgi delicesine.Ve güzel şiir.Kaleminiz hep varolsun.

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  • Arif Tatar
    Arif Tatar 06.01.2010 - 12:42

    İşve yap,naz et cevrinle öldür,
    İster baş tacı et,ister süründür,
    Bu kalp sade,sade senindir,
    Ben senin kalbine talibim tatlım

    İçten, duygulu ve anlamlı; tebrikler... 10 puan... Ant.+... Sevgiyle...

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  • Halil Şakir Taşçıoğlu
    Halil Şakir Taşçıoğlu 01.01.2010 - 22:39

    SEVDA YÜKLÜ,ANLAM DOLU
    ANLATIMI OLAĞANÜSTÜ GÜZELLİKTE,
    OKUMAYA DOYULMAYAN DİZELER.
    TAM PUAN VE DE SAYGILAR BENDEN.
    ......................HALİLŞAKİR

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  • Mertcan Mercan
    Mertcan Mercan 30.12.2009 - 12:02

    çok hoş bir şiir olmuş......aşk ne güzel bir şeyse herşeyine talip oluyoruz..acısınada -tatlısına da ....

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  • Hüseyin Çelebi
    Hüseyin Çelebi 07.12.2009 - 15:36

    Aşka talip olmak her şeyi göze almak tır yüreğine sağlık

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  • İsmail Tıkıroğlu
    İsmail Tıkıroğlu 24.11.2009 - 00:04

    İster yar diye bağrında taşı,
    İster önüme koy zehirli aşı,
    Gözümden aktı kan ile yaşı,
    Ben senin çilene talbim tatlım.

    Duygusu güzel ve titiz bir çalışma
    kutlarım

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