Already Zipped My Pants

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Already Zipped My Pants

Would you like to have more potatoes,
Or get some cheetos,
No mama!
Already zipped my pants.

Don’t you want to get new Cadillac,
Or limitless Master Card ,
No papa!
Already zipped my pants.

Shall we go for a walk,
Or drink some coke,
No my beauty!
Already zipped my pants.

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Kayıt Tarihi : 31.5.2016 20:13:00
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  • Doğan Can Kılıç
    Doğan Can Kılıç

    Thanks Zaher for the positive thoughts. This poem dedicated to Cristopher McCandless who is tired of society. And the message is no matter who he has met that trying to giving up him he already zipped his pants. I hope you watch the movie.

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  • Zaher Mzg
    Zaher Mzg

    Well written Doğan keep up!
    I just want to ask about the moral of this poem, I means what's the message you're trying to deliver to the reader?
    Thanks for sharing

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